All Comments on 'Valentine'

You've left words out that would have completed the image required.

You've put words in that destroyed the entire picture you attempted to make.

For example: "You are more than even I,

Despite my vivid dreams.

Where does (Know how to win.) fit in. It totally ruins the ending of the poem.

Sadly, to attempt to answer your question about where things fit, I would need to teach a lesson in reading poetry. I retired from teaching three years ago. Perhaps, since you find my poetry so lacking in finesse, you shouldn't read it? Just a thought...