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The Royal Line Pt. 02

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by TJSkywind02/15/15

Nicely written

With so many heirs, plotting and such will abound. People can talk about the King's virility, but the Queen Mother's ability to bear so many children, year after year, speaks remarkably about her stamina, her constitution, and her fecundity. Most women wear out after a dozen or so. But that is part of the fantasy.

The Duchess is delicious, all right.

Recommend a reader, to catch the typos. A spell checker is a great tool, but won't catch usage errors. Hoes for example. A hoe is a tool, used to till the earth, or in slang, a derogatory description for a prostitute. Hose is either used to convey liquid, usually water, or cloth worn in place of trousers.

Again, story was greatly enjoyed. Looking forward to seeing more.

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Bravo!!!!

Love love love this story! Delightful and compelling- I am looking so forward to more!

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