Not sure what you were aiming for, but pretty certain you missed it by a country mile. This mess is way beyond disturbing. It reeks of serious issues that you should probably seek professional help for. Just sayin'.
not sure what the idea of the story was, but I was disappointed
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So wrong in so many ways
Not sure what you were aiming for, but pretty certain you missed it by a country mile. This mess is way beyond disturbing. It reeks of serious issues that you should probably seek professional help for. Just sayin'.
disappointing
not sure what the idea of the story was, but I was disappointed
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