It was a good story in concept, and I was entertaining, but you had many typos for such a short story; there/their, too/to, etc. It was detracting. Good grammar is sexy. Still, there was potential. I have certainly read worse.
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It was a good story in concept, and I was entertaining, but you had many typos for such a short story; there/their, too/to, etc. It was detracting. Good grammar is sexy. Still, there was potential. I have certainly read worse.
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