& characters are likable & believable. The story so far is fluid but I would have liked to read about the fight scene to introduce Anna, the adopted Dad, & fellow workers during said scene. Keep going! You only got a week with Susan you know. Looking forward to the next 4 chapters.
The way I read, Ill read an entire book in a day (2 at most). So when I read stories in parts like this (even book series) Ill read them all before I read something else. Needless to say, your unfinished "book" frustrates me, because I am so into it!
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Enjoyed Ch. 08 just as I have enjoyed all the other chapters. Good story and looking forward to see what happens next. Very sexy!
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Relax Joker. Your Easy to read
& characters are likable & believable. The story so far is fluid but I would have liked to read about the fight scene to introduce Anna, the adopted Dad, & fellow workers during said scene. Keep going! You only got a week with Susan you know. Looking forward to the next 4 chapters.
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The way I read, Ill read an entire book in a day (2 at most). So when I read stories in parts like this (even book series) Ill read them all before I read something else. Needless to say, your unfinished "book" frustrates me, because I am so into it!
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