Claire Gets Punished

sort of interesting

The premise is interesting but knowing people, I'd say this story could use a reality check. Unless Claire is in on this as a fantasy of hers, I'm thinking Mark would have to be a lot more forceful to let her know He means business. It's one thing to tell her what he's going to do but from the sound of it He is expecting her to obey without knowing the consequences of her refusal.
Spelling and grammar make this an easy read. I just think a little more needs to be explained with regard to why Claire is participating.
3 stars.