All Comments  for

Unspoken Words: Prologue

byDomXian©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/13/15

Extremely short but a good start.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by baikalisan02/14/15

Nice start!

I hope you continue to write and post quickly!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by jackfrost62602/14/15

cool

Nice start and with so many possible ways the story could go I can't wait to see what to come next

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Unspoken Words: Prologue  or
More submissions by DomXian.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel