but you need character development - giving voice to realistic characters (in their words, thoughts, and actions) take any story beyond the ordinary and make it memorable.
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Story has potential
but you need character development - giving voice to realistic characters (in their words, thoughts, and actions) take any story beyond the ordinary and make it memorable.
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