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by Epiphany_Jones02/13/15

I have no patience for First Person Present Tense, but you made this more palatable by at least using Past Tense.

It still was a little too much "stream of consciousness" for me to really love it. You could have been a little more descriptive, but you honestly did do a nice job here. I'll give it four stars, and hope you'll get better with more practice.

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by Anonymous02/13/15

One of the best

One of the best stories that I've read in a while. Thank you

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