Delicious Treats

That's it?

Interesting story

You could enter it for the Halloween contest. But I'd suggest you expand the story a bit, to make it more fulfilling - from the moment Daisy meets the "pale man" to when she rushes downstairs at 3 AM moves very quickly compared to the earlier part of the story. Perhaps add some character development for the mystery man? And detail why/how Daisy was mesmerized by him. But still an enjoyable read!

lots of character info, abrupt ending

This just BEGS for as other chapter!

So short!

So short but I was on the edge waiting for more! Please let this become a whole series with lots of sex and she can be his, and so romantic in an owning, dominant, pet kind of way. LOVE IT!!!

Must kill

She should kill him. He is a bad guy. Plus, he couldn't have killed all those kids by himself. She should become an avenging angel.

very good......wished it was a bit longer

What a read, looking forward to a part two. there could be a hot chemistry between these two. Would love to read more. He had to have saved her for himself.... there is a reason.... I am sure you will in the next part a lot of us are wishing for....