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The Gift - In the Beginning

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/14/15

And a WACC is born.
She has been a slut for years, he just was in denial.
Now she can continue to fuck anything with a dick, but do it in front of him.

ps remember his only role is making money and cleaning the house

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by Anonymous02/14/15

Kinda like the presentation...

But in the 70's her mode of dress in a banking setting would not fly... Thus, she must have been banging a superior to continue with the bank... Just a saying

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by deadone02/14/15

??

Most of the stories in Penthouse at the time would have been FMF or FFFFFFM. There would not have been any cuckold stories!
This is just another WACC story written by some social reject living in his moms basement.

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by patillie02/14/15

Good start

but yiou quit before the good stuff. Looking fwd to the rest.

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by Anonymous02/14/15

Don't Forget

In your next story don't forget to add the "cuck" tag so that those who don't like those stories can avoid reading yours. Personally, I do not see what the cuck husbands get out of watching wifie with another man. Seeing his wife get a big orgasm? Hubbie can watch that simply by giving her one, even if he uses his hands or a toy.

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by Anonymous02/14/15

can u sing the song? We are sick, we are sick, we are sick

open marriage means you both get strange

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by Anonymous02/14/15

Put this in a chuck catergory

What a sick writer .

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by impo_6002/14/15

Ruined story...

This story was a normal fantasy and sharing story until you wrote: "Then one night one of the guys she'd been dancing and flirting with offered her some coke to take to the ladies room. My wife never turns down coke!" After all she is a drug addict and drug addicts can't be trusted to any game...

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by Anonymous02/14/15

Impo - get some sleep dude.

Every time i log in you're commenting. Take it easy.

You do know you're a complete idiot, no? Someone should tell you.

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by thebuffalo02/15/15

Not a bad story. Could have been a bit longer.

By the way, welcome home.

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by chytown02/15/15

It's A Read***

Thanks for sharing

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by Anonymous02/15/15

Great slap-stick marriage comedy.

Hubby gets the slap and wife gets the stick. Unless hubby is really really good, then wife's bull may give hubby some stick too. How long did it take to learn how to type with one hand while jacking off with the other? Had your meds yet?

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by Anonymous02/15/15

What's the point? Like we've never read a story like this before?.....

......my god, we're seeing cuck reruns now......and no new writing!

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by Anonymous02/15/15

This woman is fooling you

Would a French-Vietnamese woman be 5-10 tall? That is very tall for a French woman and extremely tall for Vietnam. Did they escape from Mao in Vietnam in the 1940's, was he even there? Sounds like someone is not telling the truth.

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by rightbank02/17/15

yup, it's a game

and he lost

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by Anonymous02/17/15

Mao's Purge in Vietnam in the 40's

Check your history ... Mao Zedong was the leader of communist China in the 40's ... not Vietnam. Vietnam was a quiet French colony in the late 40's and 50's. Not a huge deal, but it is jarring to the credibility of a story when you make such a glaring mistake.

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by BuzzCzar02/18/15

History

In the late 40's Mao was a bit tied up with fighting Chiang Kai-shek for the control of China. Vietnam was under French control. The history between Vietnam and China has been one of conflict not of much cooperation. A little research goes a long way.

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