Antonio the Serial Rapist

What the fuck

What

Kinda rushed and random. Needs a few more intimate details to give it more of an edge. I did like how it switched and he got his payback in the end though.

Riiiiiight ! (high five !).

The Punishment fits the Crime in this case. That's as it SHOULD be. Especially as the little shit would likely get a thorough ass-bollocking on a regular basis from his fellow prison inmates too. Great. THAT's as it should be in this case TOO. Oh, And throw away the key.

different

Your story is kind of different, isn't it? Almost reminds me of a documentary.

IMPUNITY

He doesn't rape with immunity, he rapes with impunity.

Carrying a grudge?

Your politics are even more trite than your prose.

Awful

Obvious and petty feminist caricature. It's basically a New York Times article written more or less from the perspective of the rapist. Keep your politics away from the realm of sexual fantasy.

If I want this shit I'll watch the news

At least they know how to write good copy

Disappointed

Firstly- The writing style doesn't include a lot of detail, which is a shame
Secondly- I was hoping he'd get away with it. That's what the story was suggesting, massively disappointing.