Lauren, My Slut Girlfriend Ch. 03

Hot

Just wish the last phrase had been " my hard cock"...cause how was he NOT still hard?

This is hot if it's a girl you just love to fuck and are having a good time with because if you really liked her than she's humiliating and abusing you. Sounds like she's starting to take over a little bit so it's time for him to take a little control back. Know he should just have fun and enjoy the ride with her but never marry her. Even let her know what a hot pig she is and fun but you should be clear you would never marry her. After all she was cheating on him and she should know how much he enjoys her but can never ever trust her.

Each time worst...

Each time worst...Each time she showing she isn't marriage material...I don't even know if she wants to marry...that's why she said they were friends from grad school!!! He must catch the opportunities to use her as much as he can...When she wants something serious he laughs in her face and says she is a whore...And he won't be lying...1*

Well, not a LW story.....

....and while technically well written, suggests a certain need in the writer to be taken advantage of by those closest to him. I would think getting off on sexual betrayal would tend to drive a shiv into one's heart, rather than excite one sexually. Hmmm.

Good cucking

Personally, I enjoy a good cuck story. If you don't, just move on to something you do like rather than complaining about this. I am looking forward to the next installment.

I Don't Understand Some Literotica Readers

If you want to critique the writing in a helpful way, fine. If you want to argue the character of the characters, what is the point? If you like this type of story, read. If you don't, what are you doing here? Writers write for many reasons and sometimes purging one's devils may be one of them. Who is to say? Advice: Just read and enjoy or move on to spend your time reading something more in tune with your tastes.