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Twin Haiku

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31702/17/15

KISSING A RELATIVE---NON SEXUAL

the stiffening occurs because it is. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/23/15

Read the author's bio.

It's about a brother/sister relationship.

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by eidetic02/27/17

difficult

Haiku is a difficult form, requiring exactly 17 syllables.
You have executed it well and in English no less.
Thank you.

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