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A very promising start.
Thank you for this chapter. Please continue with this story.
wow really interesting
Very nice start looking forward to more hope that it will be sooner than later. There is great detail and a nice background to the characters. I can see them in my head. thank you for sharing...
Lucky Randy
lucky well cant say more I like your thoughts.
cool
great and imaginative as always. I love your writing but what about the computer
story? anyways keep updating all your stuff is wonderful! :)
looking forward
Excellent start and background. Looking forward to future installments
Im looking forward to the rest of the story
Nice start
Like the thesis. Interesting characters. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
great intro!
Very nice! I have to agree with you about the constant tentacle/monster rape in hentai. There need to be more consensual monster/tentacle stories. Keep up the great work!
Excellent start
Great characters, wonderful build-up. I just can't wait for the next chapter
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