Decent set-up with many interesting possibilities and you just let it go limp. This was a waste of my time and yours.
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Anonymous04/21/15
Disappointed
Started off promising then it started to get going . It then totally lost the plot. Have another try put some more body into the story.
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Anonymous04/24/15
Please expand and keep it going
I really liked the beginning of this story, it created a lot of anticipation for something big but I just didn't feel satisfied with the ending. It would be great if you could expand the story a bit: young schoolgirls, wide-eyed and very innocent led by their female teacher in lessons where they are exploring the bodies of attractive young male props.
English
Great story........
....think of how well that could work!!!!!
Disappointing
Decent set-up with many interesting possibilities and you just let it go limp. This was a waste of my time and yours.
Disappointed
Started off promising then it started to get going . It then totally lost the plot. Have another try put some more body into the story.
Please expand and keep it going
I really liked the beginning of this story, it created a lot of anticipation for something big but I just didn't feel satisfied with the ending. It would be great if you could expand the story a bit: young schoolgirls, wide-eyed and very innocent led by their female teacher in lessons where they are exploring the bodies of attractive young male props.
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