Black & White Ch. 01

An intriguing start.

I'm looking forward to reading more.

mmm

Keep going

i hope this wont be a boss abuses employee story.cat seems to actually care for her boss and the boss sounds like she will take advantage of her

Been done before, & done better!

Don't get me wrong, you write fairly well, but you scent of dude jizm.

This is a rehash of other stories written by much better lesbian erotica writers. There's nothing really new here, just a masturbatory fantasy that might get your rocks off, but it doesn't tickle me at all.

If you're not a dude, I'll run outside right now and jill off in the freezing winter weather blustering outside my condo.

Erin

More please!

More more more more!!!!

OMG, I'm ashamed of myself.

I read your story again and was amazed at my brazen presumptuousness. I must have been hallucinating when I wrote my last comment, or smoking some really skank weed. Because this story, now that I'm well rested and somewhat sober, 'cause this Zinfandel I'm drinking is pert and sultry and packs quite a punch, but this story is intriguing and pretty damned hot. In fact, I'm so embarrassed by my previous comment that I'm gonna create a new login just to vote you what this story deserves, maybe I'll create 2 new logins to make up for my stupidity and ignorance.

A second chapter better not be a tease. I'm not sure I could stand it if you were just playing with me.

XOX,

Erin

made me wet

i liked it and i think you should
keep on writing this story.

I really loved it.You wouldn't
believe how wet I got.When I
was reading it i was masturbating
too.( actually i was doing it all the
same as Cat was doing it).Please
keep writting this amasing story!!!!!!!!!!


XOXO