OK, you did Glen good. But that part of Dottie's life feels like a sidebar.
Since you accelerated the time line through her entire 20 something years with Glen, I got the feeling it was just a interim phase of her emotional and intellectual life. I got the love and commitment, but since there were no real pithy events described in detail, this phase of her life seems anticlimactic. Which I suspect it will turn out to be. Happy Glen got what he got, but I suspect the next phase will be a deeper and richer experience for Dottie, and her next man?
Glen comes over as a wonderful person who shaped Dottie to be just as wonderful.
The initial situation will probably be reversed the remaining chapters. One thing that surprised me was that pastor Glen had acceptance from the women. My experience when I went to make a donation to a women's shelter where my daughter was volunteering was that they were all afraid of me.
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Just keeps getting better
I'm enthralled.
OK, you did Glen good. But that part of Dottie's life feels like a sidebar.
Since you accelerated the time line through her entire 20 something years with Glen, I got the feeling it was just a interim phase of her emotional and intellectual life. I got the love and commitment, but since there were no real pithy events described in detail, this phase of her life seems anticlimactic. Which I suspect it will turn out to be. Happy Glen got what he got, but I suspect the next phase will be a deeper and richer experience for Dottie, and her next man?
Well written and much appreciated. Thank You.
Good Romantic Tale
Glen comes over as a wonderful person who shaped Dottie to be just as wonderful.
The initial situation will probably be reversed the remaining chapters. One thing that surprised me was that pastor Glen had acceptance from the women. My experience when I went to make a donation to a women's shelter where my daughter was volunteering was that they were all afraid of me.
I do enjoy the Ginaverse.
That's all I have to sat about that.
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