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by Anonymous

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by Maximguy02/16/15

Hot!

You fit in the angst, hot sex, and even some romance in a short story. Bravo.

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by Anonymous02/16/15

Metasis

A play on the word meta no doubt ... including the "sis" ... nice story ... so will metasis be your characters keyword?

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by Anonymous02/16/15

this happens lots more often than people, especially terrified parents, care to know

A big brother fucking the shit out of his baby sister, that is. In a way, it's inevitable. The kids grow up together, and down deep they love each other to pieces. His sister's sweet little slit is the first cunt the boy ever sees. Her brother's male package, his meaty cock and loaded balls, is the first one the girl ever lays her eyes on. They're young, they're riddled with teaming hormones, they quickly figure out what goes into what--and presto! big brother climbs on top of his baby sister, slips his hard young cock up her pretty little twat, and they're off to the races. In this excellent story, the phone call from mom interrupts the kids, so Zach doesn't succeed in blowing his brotherly balls up inside Erica's cute little cunt, though her warm wet mouth is a not bad second best. But not to worry. Now that they've smashed the idiotic taboo and stomped it to a well-deserved death, whenever they're together Erica's adorable little coochie's going to filled to the brim with Zach's creamy semen. And that's exactly where a big brother's sperm belongs--right up his baby sister's fuckhole.

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by Anonymous02/16/15

Interesting story

Sister do not need code word to get brother. They just need to flash and tease a bit and bro will be jo for them.

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by Averygoodlay02/17/15

Not bad

I lke the code word thing but how would it work if he didn't read the same stories as her?

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by Anonymous02/17/15

loved it

I loved every detail except for like literally the first two paragraphs. You started out saying she was reading porn on her laptop and then switched it to her phone. Just sayin

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by Monagamous_Now02/17/15

Loved it.

HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! ... that is all.

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by Just_John102/18/15

Nice job!

Nice story well written. I enjoyed your character development and the writing seemed to melt away. I thought the premise was fun and erotic. As the title says... Nice job. Thank you for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed the read

JJ1

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by CarlusMagnus02/18/15

Really good!

I really enjoyed this one. It's several notches above the occasional merely good stories that we see on this site--every now and then. You should write more about naughty brothers interacting with their naughty sisters. Five stars!

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by Anonymous03/03/15

i loved this, written well and I got into it

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by mike250105/14/15

Ok, that was excellent! ...and ingenious ;)

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by Anonymous06/15/15

jesus christ

holy shit. so good.

this wasn't a usual "oh shit i saw my sister masturbating and now i want to fuck her" kind of story.

amazing.

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by Anonymous08/19/15

Hah!

Incestion

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by Rapier87509/14/15

Now that was good !

Damn good !

More that this, please !

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by Turtle195210/23/16

wonderful

thank you, I loved it and would like to read some more of this like, what happens when she moves in?

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