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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/16/15

1st-2nd person stories

I do not like stories told in the first to second person format. I do not identify, nor I suspect am I supposed to. We usually communicate in the 3rd person. Try to improve your skills.

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by Anonymous02/16/15

Absolutely agree with comment by previous anon...

First person to second person format simply doesn't do it.

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