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wow
just incredible
08
Wow...wow...is all i kept thinking as i read on and on, thinking to myself on how being a sub/slave it is hard to submit to both worlds when you try to find your true self within...in pleasing your Master...His Desires...His Wants and Needs. It makes one feel as if she can do better without soundings as making excuses please...all relationships are different and coming from vanilla all one's life to find your true purpose is very humbling. Thank You for showing myself and possibly others that it takes time and patience and training. Amazingly written and as always loved it. i would buy...read most anything Y/you have written, its wonderful. i shall continue on. again, thank You
wow
as i read through the chapters i love the way You give both sides the Masters and subs thoughts trully great gives me a better understanding.
I'm enjoying ...
the ride you have started me on. ~ Red
~cherry's~ thoughts
this one is speakless at this point...her only thoughts are of the Comment below made by You Sir and the feelings she is left with...
for all that Doms/Dommes and subs give in giving of themselves...thoughtful and meaningful thank Y/you's do alot to coninue A/all of U/us on the path of submission
~she hopes her thoughts are on target...she thinks the vanilla demon has entered her thoughts as well as dominiques~
"And thank you for your generous votes for preceding chapters. With them I know you are enjoying 'dominique'. Without them, I for one would lose the motivation to submit My stories."
I'm enjoying the story - - -
and appreciate the effort it took to write it. The characters are developing well and, as the experience continues, we see the results. Thanks
I'm enjoying the story - - -
and appreciate the effort it took to write it. The characters are developing well and, as the experience continues, we see the results. Thanks
I love your work.....
I read your stories so many times, I cannot get enough that I read them over and over again, I lost count lol. Keep up the great work, hope to read more and more of your stories.
very nice Sir Nathan.
Whoo Ahhh!!!! A bratty sub for a reason anyone?????
good
I love this story... it is to put it simply "totally hot". Gets me aflame with desire. Gotta go take a cold shower now. Thank you!
What's with the whole grammar thing?
What is with the whole O/o, W/w and T/t thing? Anyone? Is it just bad formatting? Or are you, the writer, just not paying attention to mistakes? It might serve a purpose, but it looks sloppy and can be hard to follow.
Sir Nathan, You make my heart hurt and swell all in a sentence. What a gift You have.
Frustration
I always considered myself a submissive but after reading this I wouldn't say I'm a dom but I would be a pretty bad 'slave'. I'm more non-submissive masochistic and if I was in Dominique's position. I would've fucked up Kate, dissed Paul, and left Andrew with a little "go fuck yourself" letter on the table.
great work!
i am loving this story. The mindfucks!! I was crying along with dominique, at a few parts. Bravo!
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