All Comments on 'Ransom Ch. 05'

I love this story

You can't leave it there !

Grrrrrrrr.

Taps fingers ominously on the table..

You writing yet lady ??

Absolutely loved IT!!!!!!!

Dominic sounds so incredibly hot and I want him to go get her!

That would be so hot!

Thank you for writing this awesome story 😍

I will anxiously await your lovely writing ^^

I hope she's pregnant.

Awesome! Can't wait for more!

I really want to know the reason behind that abduction. What did that family do to Dominic and Jakob.

Oh and also, i kinda wish Kailee would go after Dom instead of the other way around.

There seems to be a lot going on with Dom (I really like him^^)

We hate your story - if you can call it that. Cardboard characters acting without rhyme or reason and spouting inane dialogue. Even fiction has to be in touch with reality to make for a good story. This mess is so far out in left field that you can't see it. UGH!

Hey no one gave you the right to speak for the people. So why don't you change that "we" to an "i" cause it's just you buddy. I thoroughly enjoy this story and so do the other commenters. Your opinion is your opinion. Not ours.

Well said lady

Yes!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I really enjoyed this too. I don't like to comment, but positive feedback has encouraged my writing so I hope you update soon. Happy to have found a fellow Aussie on site haha.

I just found this story and read all five chapters today. I really enjoyed them and hope you continue soon!!

Even though I know they'll probably end up together sigh I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.

I'm big fan of you

Pls cont "Just One Game" too

Ps.I love this chapter :)

Welcome back!!!

I have to say that I am having a hellish week at work but this has totally made my day! I am totally into the story! So please, do continue this one and 'Just One Game' as soon as your work/social life allows!

Hi again! Just want to thank everyone for their feedback and support...

Masterfuljim: Haha! Patience....I'm getting there :P

Yourstruly15: You're most welcome :) so glad you enjoyed it!

Ellienora35: No comment on that one ;) you'll just have to wait and see.

Mechanica: I'm very excited to share the rest of the story! Glad you're enjoying it :D

Anon "we don't hate you": As always, any feedback is appreciated. I don't claim to be a professional writer - it's something I enjoy and still very much a learning process for me. Having said that, there are many people enjoying my story and I'm certainly not going to stop writing because one person claims to hate it. What I fail to understand is why, if you hate it so much, are you continuing to read and comment five chapters in?

LizaLive13: Precisely what I tried to say above :) thanks for that!

Shygirlost: Sounds like I better get writing!

Bellie444: You're the first Aussie I've come across on here! I'll have to check out your stories when I get a chance. Thanks for the lovely comment :)

IsabellaRoggi: I'm sorry to hear about your awful week! Thank you for all your encouraging emails and comments while I've been away. I'll get the next chapters out as soon as I can!

Have a great weekend everyone xxx

The story started off a little slow, but I'm glad I kept reading through the last few chapters. I'm really excited to see what comes next.

I'm so excited for the next chapter!

Wtf, Nath? That's your baby sister! They'd better go after them because Dominic is coming for her whether they like it or not.

Ha Ha Ha! I love that she's escaped AND he's got the money. He has absolutely no excuse to go after her now. Can't wait for the next chapter

she actually shot him. You go girl!

happy to read this new chapter.

happy about the storyline of this one.

happy to know that it will be a next one.

In my opinion, you are doing a great job, and i'm not used to mean words, but f..k the anonymous haters.

Please hurry with the next chapter! I'm holding my breath until you do!

I just came across this story, and I love it. The chemistry between Kailee and Dominic is so hot, and I agree with one of the other comments - despite how brutish he acts, I really like his character. I'm interested to see how this plays out, there's just the right amount of intrigue around Dominic's character and his link to the Brooks. Great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this story and need more! Pretty please?!?! I check every morning hoping a new chapter will be up. I love that she escaped and can't wait to see if she gets stolen again(fingers crossed)

When when when when when? :)

Like everyone else, we all r eagerly awaiting the nxt chapter. Please don't leave this story half undone.

three months! :( Any news when an update will be available?

it is an AMAZING OUTSTANDING story HURRY UP AND CONTINUE please

New installment please.

This is great, not wanting it to end! Especially with a tall dark Russian of my own I've been flirting with, way to fuel the flames!

i have followed this story since the first chapter and reread each 30 times please update soon

Sorry guys, I've been busy with life's ups and downs, but chapter 6 is a long one and I'm working on the final edits! Hope to have it to you soon xxx

Wuhu, welcome back! Hopefully the downs have not been so bad, but we are happy to have you back!

Please please please moreeeeeeee

Could you tell us if the final changes will last a month, few months, until 2016? Kinda checking nack every day for your amazing story!

I can honestly say this is one of my favorite stories on here I love the way Dom keeps pursuing her. When is the next chapter coming out?!?

Sorry I'm busy with life and all the awful things that come with it...I know how frustrating it is to have to check every day and not see a chapter. Only way I can think to send you an update is to email, so if you want a notification send me a PM with your email address (make up a new one if you're worried about anonymity) and I'll email you when the next chapter is up xo