Not a good enough reason to stay abstained. Guys, at least I don't like to waste such a fine display of a woman's passion!
Glad our hero showed the appropriate reaction.
Please continue.
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Anonymous02/21/15
Then he stood up and slammed the chair into the floor, smashing it.
Grabbing the broken chair leg he swung it at the gun. The gun exploded and the bullet killed the one of the guards. Stunned, Angela dropped the gun. Dan picked it up,killed the other guard and as Angela tried to run from the room he put a bullet into the back of her head. Laughing to himself he thought -"Not exactly as planned, but the results were good". The end to an implausible pile of garbage. And my ending made way more sense than yours. Did you even bother to proof read this? It was simply awful.
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Preposterous......
Not a good enough reason to stay abstained. Guys, at least I don't like to waste such a fine display of a woman's passion!
Glad our hero showed the appropriate reaction.
Please continue.
Then he stood up and slammed the chair into the floor, smashing it.
Grabbing the broken chair leg he swung it at the gun. The gun exploded and the bullet killed the one of the guards. Stunned, Angela dropped the gun. Dan picked it up,killed the other guard and as Angela tried to run from the room he put a bullet into the back of her head. Laughing to himself he thought -"Not exactly as planned, but the results were good". The end to an implausible pile of garbage. And my ending made way more sense than yours. Did you even bother to proof read this? It was simply awful.
I thought it was fun
Just enough to get him off but restraint in the "punishment". Well done.
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