Oozed pre-cum reading this :-)
Nice story, but chill with the commas a bit. Periods are your friend.
Thank you for your comment Anonymous, I didnt actually have that many in there, when the story was posted it was first moderated by someone. All i can assume is thst that was done during that process
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Oozed pre-cum reading this :-)
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Nice story, but chill with the commas a bit. Periods are your friend.
Thank you
Thank you for your comment Anonymous, I didnt actually have that many in there, when the story was posted it was first moderated by someone.
All i can assume is thst that was done during that process
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