Why do you read a story about eating shit if you find it sick? The author didn't hide what it was about and you knew what it was before reading. You critize a story about scat when you don't like scat. That's just useless. And posting as Anonymous takes lot of courage, bravo.
Sure the story isn't very good but it's not because of the scat. It's because there is no teasing and it goes to the girl eating her mother's shit right away. You don't have time to get in the story before the climax comes. Maybe having the girl slowly becoming attracted to foul smells and the progressing on the scat thing would have made a better story.
I don't understand why people kill a writer in comments and ratings when the topic includes something that doesn't turn you on? check out the table of contents, there is erotica for almost every kink and perversion here. there's just as many people who think fucking a family member, or even fantasizing about it, is sick and disgusting, yet it's one of the most active topics.
the story title clearly defines what's contained within, so why even bother clicking thru if your moral compass is so easily thrown off kilter?
personally, I don't care for scat play. pee is more my thing. but I would never 1-star a story or leave a blistering comment, just because the author gets off on something I don't.
get over yourselves you anonymous cowards with the holier than thou complex, ON A PORN SITE!
keep writing your passion no limit story teller, but you might find your work more well received under the Fetish topic.
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Anonymous02/17/15
Shitty story...............
but I loved it. I used to jerk off using shit as a lubricant.
Thank You for Reading my Story and for Leaving Comments!!!
Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this story. Furthermore, thank you for posting your opinions, because they reveal who you really are and what you stand for. The comments that, “This should have never been written.” That is exactly the reason I write these stories, because whatever is hidden in darkness of the human imagination, eventually manifests itself as psychosis, which causes the horrors that we see on the nightly news. Second the folks who think they being clever by posting statements such as, “Shitty Story” or “This is crap.” Thank for revealing yourselves as idiots. Third, the story is about the irony of human nature, what some people find grotesque is art to others, and one cannot exist without the other. Without contrast, how can we experience beauty? Forth, the story is about love and affection, a mother who loves her daughter and is willing to do anything to relieve her suffering. Thank you, and God bless all of you.
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Anonymous02/18/15
Pushing the Envelope?
Every so often, even in a forum such as Literotica, some author with an agenda (an axe to grind) come along and tries to push the envelope by writing a story that makes use of some sexual predilection that is not typically associated with the specific genre or category to which the story is submitted.
I didn't bother to actually READ this story. The title revealed the story's true focus, and I will give the author 'props' for that. At least he/she didn't use the tactic that some have used, in the past, of concealing the true focus of his/her story under some unassuming title.
I will suggest, however, that this story more correctly belongs in the "Fetish" genre, which is where most of the stories involving strange and unusual sexual kinks may be found. The author is even in some agreement with this, judging by the list of 'tags' used for this story. "Fetish" (though misspelled) is included in that list.
As far as the author's own little diatribe (in the comments section) is concerned, my advice is simple. Deal with the negative reception by simply accepting the fact that you deserve it. When you write a tale that focuses on eating shit, and submit it to Lit to be included in a genre where this particular kink is exceedingly rare, if not totally foreign, you're bound to get some shitty comments tossed at you. Deal with it, learn your lesson, and either move on, develop a thicker skin, or decide that you love to get crappy fang-mail.
There are several meanings for the word, 'scat'. One is a reference to the sort of nonsense-words used as song lyrics typified by Frank Sinatra's "Scooby-dooby-dooo" in his song, "Strangers In The Night". Another is the reference to solid waste / excrement - though typically when used of ANIMAL feces. The third is its use as a verb meaning "to go off, to depart, hastily", and is typically used in its imperative (command) form: "Scat!" (figuratively, "Get out of here!") - and that's my last word to the "nolimitstoryteller" on this particular submission.
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Anonymous02/18/15
I Like It!
The story has a sick sexiness to it. What's lacking is the character development of the mother and daughter, both physically and emotionally. I know there is so some, but there is room for so much more. You have a lot to work with here but it's done in a briefly manner which hurts the story some.
Can't wait for Ch.2!
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Anonymous02/18/15
Dumb
Sometimes people do things they think is art. They put it on display for others to see. Sometimes others think it's worthless and showed no talent and wonder at the mentality of the submitter that could not judge it likewise prior to public display. Well, I'm in the wondering group.
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Anonymous02/18/15
To the author
You said, "Thank for revealing yourselves as idiots."
To insult your readers when YOU provide them the entertainment, which you choose to do so for free, is bullshit. Why write if your attitude views people so low? Don't like anonymous comments that go along with free sex story sites? Then don't write or don't post here. That, or don't allow comments. Or.... delete the ones you don't like so everyone can see how thin your skin is.
Seriously, if you had posted in Fetish, you probably wouldn't have had to go through this.
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Anonymous02/20/15
My cat is smarter than you.
My cat is smarter than you. He covers his poo up, and he leaves it where it belongs. Then he eats his cat food. My cat would never do what you write about.
That is because my cat is smarter than you.
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Anonymous02/23/15
Great story
As a long time poop eater I am happy to know that I am not alone. I hope your mommy fed you many more times after that.
English
Fucking Disgusting
Some stories should remain untold.
Especially foul.
I agree. Some stories should not only not be told, but the mods should reject them outright.
O.o
I can't... I just can't justify a comment on this story. I have lost too many brain cells over it already. Curse you morbid curiosity!!
I can't believe I read the whole thing
What a load of crap. All you need now is a glass of piss to wash the foul taste away.
then don't read them
you weren't forced to read were you
MDR
Why do you read a story about eating shit if you find it sick? The author didn't hide what it was about and you knew what it was before reading. You critize a story about scat when you don't like scat. That's just useless. And posting as Anonymous takes lot of courage, bravo.
Sure the story isn't very good but it's not because of the scat. It's because there is no teasing and it goes to the girl eating her mother's shit right away. You don't have time to get in the story before the climax comes. Maybe having the girl slowly becoming attracted to foul smells and the progressing on the scat thing would have made a better story.
move on to another story
I don't understand why people kill a writer in comments and ratings when the topic includes something that doesn't turn you on? check out the table of contents, there is erotica for almost every kink and perversion here. there's just as many people who think fucking a family member, or even fantasizing about it, is sick and disgusting, yet it's one of the most active topics.
the story title clearly defines what's contained within, so why even bother clicking thru if your moral compass is so easily thrown off kilter?
personally, I don't care for scat play. pee is more my thing. but I would never 1-star a story or leave a blistering comment, just because the author gets off on something I don't.
get over yourselves you anonymous cowards with the holier than thou complex, ON A PORN SITE!
keep writing your passion no limit story teller, but you might find your work more well received under the Fetish topic.
Shitty story...............
but I loved it. I used to jerk off using shit as a lubricant.
Thank You for Reading my Story and for Leaving Comments!!!
Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this story. Furthermore, thank you for posting your opinions, because they reveal who you really are and what you stand for. The comments that, “This should have never been written.” That is exactly the reason I write these stories, because whatever is hidden in darkness of the human imagination, eventually manifests itself as psychosis, which causes the horrors that we see on the nightly news. Second the folks who think they being clever by posting statements such as, “Shitty Story” or “This is crap.” Thank for revealing yourselves as idiots. Third, the story is about the irony of human nature, what some people find grotesque is art to others, and one cannot exist without the other. Without contrast, how can we experience beauty? Forth, the story is about love and affection, a mother who loves her daughter and is willing to do anything to relieve her suffering. Thank you, and God bless all of you.
Pushing the Envelope?
Every so often, even in a forum such as Literotica, some author with an agenda (an axe to grind) come along and tries to push the envelope by writing a story that makes use of some sexual predilection that is not typically associated with the specific genre or category to which the story is submitted.
I didn't bother to actually READ this story. The title revealed the story's true focus, and I will give the author 'props' for that. At least he/she didn't use the tactic that some have used, in the past, of concealing the true focus of his/her story under some unassuming title.
I will suggest, however, that this story more correctly belongs in the "Fetish" genre, which is where most of the stories involving strange and unusual sexual kinks may be found. The author is even in some agreement with this, judging by the list of 'tags' used for this story. "Fetish" (though misspelled) is included in that list.
As far as the author's own little diatribe (in the comments section) is concerned, my advice is simple. Deal with the negative reception by simply accepting the fact that you deserve it. When you write a tale that focuses on eating shit, and submit it to Lit to be included in a genre where this particular kink is exceedingly rare, if not totally foreign, you're bound to get some shitty comments tossed at you. Deal with it, learn your lesson, and either move on, develop a thicker skin, or decide that you love to get crappy fang-mail.
There are several meanings for the word, 'scat'. One is a reference to the sort of nonsense-words used as song lyrics typified by Frank Sinatra's "Scooby-dooby-dooo" in his song, "Strangers In The Night". Another is the reference to solid waste / excrement - though typically when used of ANIMAL feces. The third is its use as a verb meaning "to go off, to depart, hastily", and is typically used in its imperative (command) form: "Scat!" (figuratively, "Get out of here!") - and that's my last word to the "nolimitstoryteller" on this particular submission.
I Like It!
The story has a sick sexiness to it. What's lacking is the character development of the mother and daughter, both physically and emotionally. I know there is so some, but there is room for so much more. You have a lot to work with here but it's done in a briefly manner which hurts the story some.
Can't wait for Ch.2!
Dumb
Sometimes people do things they think is art. They put it on display for others to see. Sometimes others think it's worthless and showed no talent and wonder at the mentality of the submitter that could not judge it likewise prior to public display. Well, I'm in the wondering group.
To the author
You said, "Thank for revealing yourselves as idiots."
To insult your readers when YOU provide them the entertainment, which you choose to do so for free, is bullshit. Why write if your attitude views people so low? Don't like anonymous comments that go along with free sex story sites? Then don't write or don't post here. That, or don't allow comments. Or.... delete the ones you don't like so everyone can see how thin your skin is.
Seriously, if you had posted in Fetish, you probably wouldn't have had to go through this.
My cat is smarter than you.
My cat is smarter than you. He covers his poo up, and he leaves it where it belongs. Then he eats his cat food. My cat would never do what you write about.
That is because my cat is smarter than you.
Great story
As a long time poop eater I am happy to know that I am not alone. I hope your mommy fed you many more times after that.
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