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by Anonymous

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by chytown02/18/15

It's **

A read.

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by Whackdoodle02/18/15

One thing for you to give your wife permission to fuck another man.

Another for her to cheat I you behind your back and only tell you AFTER you coerced it out of her.
If she was willing to cheat once, she would do so again or has done so in the past. Either way, how can you trust her?

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by Twentyseven02/18/15

Good Luck

You'll need it.

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by tazz31702/18/15

AND A GREAT TIME

was had by the host only. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Another run-of-the-mill wimp story.

You sick people writing this kind of crap are thoroughly disgusting.

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by impo_6002/18/15

I didn't like part 1...This was worst...

I didn't like part 1...This was worst...She is a drugged cheating wife, with no remorse or morals or respect for her husband...The husband is a man with no self-respect and no morals that accept a cheating wife that can't love or respect him...A sad tale I hope ends here...

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Ridiculous Comments

I am always amazed to read these kinds of comments to these kind of stories. I loved the story, by the way-very well written, and I could identify with the lust that drove everyone involved to go for the gusto offered by these circumstances. As for you guys (Wimps, Hypocritical Assholes) who feel self-righteously compelled to vomit your opinions so harshly- why do you read these stories, to begin with? Second, my own perspective, as someone who has lovingly and lustfully shared his wife with a couple of select friends , and her hers with me- this actually involves a huge amount of love and trust between the spouses/partners. Each person has to love and trust the other completely, be secure enough in their love and relationship to not get jealous, and to want your partner to experience as much pleasure as they can. It's like a fetish-different strokes for different folks. It is extremely hypocritical to think a woman is not as entitled to erotic pleasure as much as a man. So either stop reading stories in this category, or keep your judgmental comments to yourself. And yes, I know a lot of these kind of relationships don't have happy endings- they aren't for everyone, and not everyone is properly motivated, or truly in love with their spouses. But that has nothing to do with the human psyche and it's capacity for love and eroticism to flourish and grow together.

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by Anonymous02/18/15

re: anonymous-ridiculous comments

Maybe to cuckies like you, but they speak the truth. Who are you trying to convince of this lifestyle, us or yourself? 1*

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by Anonymous02/18/15

What a horrible way to live or think for that matter

# 1 Get some help

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Why the fuck are some people on this site?

Ask yourselves. Look into the mirror and discover something. She is a ho and the best friend is a fucking betrayer, yet that's what this is all about.

Loved it. 4*

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by Anonymous02/18/15

This story is a gift to read

and so I gave it a 5 dear annony!

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by Anonymous02/18/15

re: Ridiculous Comments

This is what you wrote that was directed at the story.

"I loved the story, by the way-very well written, and I could identify with the lust that drove everyone involved to go for the gusto offered by these circumstances. "

The rest went on and on slamming others for daring to have a different opinion than yours, and yet THEY'RE the ones posting ridiculous comments. Right. On what fucking planet?

To write that much, the comments must have really hit close to home.

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Jeez, another empty wrapper from someones cuckburger. Click, into the litter bin.

I bet I've got more 1's than you've got time to write this worthless shit. But why don't you try?

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Another "It's a true story" - look at me, look at me!

Dear idiot author - this is a porn site. NO ONE believes a word that you've written down. That you would write such a derivative story and make yourself look like a complete fool is funny enough. Just what everyone wants is a slut wife that exposes him to every disease known to man. This was just another in the long long line of wimp/cuckold/cheating slut wife stories that seems to infest the LW section these days. Your story was neither cleverly written, erotic or interesting. Did you even bother to proof read this garbage? I swear a chimpanzee could write a better story.

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by rjordan02/18/15

Good first story

I hope you aren't discouraged by the nameless anonymice who infest this category and obviously should leave their mom's basement to get professional help.

"True story" is usually a cop out. Either they aren't really true stories or they are and the writer thinks the story will have more credibility. Neither is true. It doesn't matter whether the story comes from true events or not. It has to stand on its own as a STORY. Usually, a little poetic or literary license makes for a better story than the true version. Think about it.

You write well and will only get better if you write more. Hope to see more in the future.

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by carvohi02/18/15

Oh my...

So that night or late that morning after the big going away party she tells her husband she had sex with a friend as a gift. Husband got excited and enjoyed his sloppy seconds, and that's where you leave off.

Let me take this a few more steps.

The next day a hung over husband asks his loving wife for a second rendition of the going away story. OK he thinks, we were all a little high.

Over the next few days he continues to ponder what she'd told him. Gee, he wonders, was this the only time? Were there other special occasions for other special people? Did they practice safe sex. Is my wife still on the pill, or could this result in a pregnancy?

Over the next several weeks he continues to wonder; what is she doing at work? How did she get her last promotion? Gee, she just did it with Jeff and never asked me; why I wonder? Did she think I'd be OK with or was she a little worried I might not go for it?

Two months later he's thinking. Whatever happened to 'forsaking all others'? Gosh I've been faithful; couldn't she have given him something, anything else? Wow I remember all looks at the party. Does she respect me? Yeah, where's the respect?

Then sometime later our hero comes to the only conclusion he can; she's not trustworthy, she's not who I thought she was, she'll do it again, she really doesn't love me. Yeah, time to pack up the knapsack and call it quits. It'l be a fifty-fifty split.



Thanks for the read. Now where are YOU taking it? Is he a happy semen slurper or is he a regular human man with natural pride and self-esteem facing a truly troubling situation that in all likelihood has only one unhappy conclusion.

A shame, a damn shame. Poor girl probably really loves her husband; she just kicked open a door no real man likes to peek into.

Thanks for the read. I'll vote when I see a sequel, a realistic sequel.

Jedd Clampett (Note: I'm not an anony.)

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by Anonymous02/18/15

This story sucks big time.

and I gave it a 1* dear bonnie. Isn't this fun?

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by Anonymous02/18/15

re: rjordan-good first story

It appears you need the professional help. Anybody that thinks cuckoldry is erotic has deep emotional problems bordering on psychosis. It appears, like so many of you, that there is a need to attack other readers that don't agree with your definition of erotica. Do you even know what that word means? With the exception of one story today all the ones posted in loving wives where pure trash. Anybody that gives a story like this 5 stars is insulting the very good erotic authors that post to this site. End of rant. 1* for this non-erotic trash. (ML)

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by bonnietaylor202/18/15

gave it a 5 for a great story

and I think you are driving the asshole annony crazy!

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by bonnietaylor202/18/15

dear asshole anony yes it's fun gave it another 5 and will keeep doing so

as long as you keep posting your shit!!

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by Anonymous02/18/15

well dear bonnie

I'm glad you finally realized how fun it is. Keep on posting, I'll give it another 1, even though it's meaningless, but if it makes you feel better. Glad to be of help. I agree with the last anon, anybody that gives a story like this a 5 is insulting the good writers
and should have their head examined. Shall we start with yours bonnie? Isn't this fun?

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Sorry no

This is not wife watching. She could not care less if you watched and in fact started with out you there. This is simply a gutter slut and a brain dead WACC. She does not love, respect, or care about him. All he is to her is a walking paycheck anything more is his on dilution. How his "good friends" must respect him to fuck her behind his back, wow. This guy is bind deaf and plain old stupid.

Do wonder when this gay fuck wad will try and fuck a different girl.

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by Anonymous02/18/15

1 star

How long did your marriage last, before you divorced the fucking pig, not long I bet. Story shows you that she didn't love or have any respect for her husband, to shit on him like she did. Did she give you herpes, so that if you divorced her, nobody would want to marry a guy with herpes, or aids. Is that the reason that Bonnietaylor is mad at all men! Did some guy give you herpes or aids Bonnie? Instead of blaming men, maybe you should blame yourself, if you wouldn't have fucked so many different men, you wouldn't have gotten herpes!!!!!

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by Anonymous02/19/15

And when this slut gives both of them the STD gift - they will have deserved it.

OMG, these characters are as brain-dead as idiots like bonnietaylor2 and other cucks.

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by Anonymous02/19/15

Another chucky author

Just love to marry a women who fucks every guy she likes!

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by Anonymous02/19/15

Best get tested and put.....

.....as much distance between you and the slut as possible, before she kills you with an unwanted gift from a "friend".
On the other hand, she just handed you permission to fuck every woman you meet. You should hook up with the sexiest of your mutual friends and fuck her brains out, then confess and ask if wifey is mad.
Mad? Fuck that, she'd go atomic in 4 milliseconds! And they say it's a man's world?
Nah, that's a tawdry coverup that women think they can do anything and it's all good. But if her man acts the same way, she'll have a melt down and deep fry his ass in gear oil.

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by Anonymous02/19/15

Even if it is true...

.... it's still crap.

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by thebuffalo02/25/15

Good story and reasonably told. Enjoyed the read.

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