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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/18/15

more!

More!

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by EgoTrixi02/18/15

Story?!? What story?

...Are you going to write one??

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Yes, more. IMMEDIATELY!

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by mrwidehorizons02/18/15

Great start!

Please continue! And you said above this happened for real?!! I'm more than a little aroused and curious to see what happened. Thanks for sharing!

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by Anonymous02/18/15

More like an opening paragraph

than a story. What? Did you run out of ideas?

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by Leanne_sissy02/18/15

Story?

Yes of course it continues and of course it is an opening paragraph, reasons are, I've never published on Literotica before and I wanted to see if this start interested people. I always write in chapters and I shall add more paragraphs to this one as I have time. And yes many of my stories including this one, are based on experience.
Love Leanne x

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by Anonymous02/19/15

Dear sweet Leanne

Yes, dear sweet Leanne, I want to hear the rest of the story. Keep going, Leanne.

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by BrendaNW02/19/15

more please

A nice start and good writing.. please continue

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by SumacandIvy02/28/15

Off to a Good Start

Well written and full of promise. I'm ready for more.

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by Anonymous04/07/15

Yes!

A nice start...

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