Well written combination of physical and emotional heat
Your ability to combine thoughts, emotion, and physical heat, makes your stories both intellectually interesting and erotic. Keep writing and keep sharing them with us!
I know you are writing from Cole's perspective, but if you could add some of Nikki's perspective - for example, how she liked getting her ass fucked - through her actions and her words (you didn't have her vocalize at all when Cole was fucking her ass) I think it would make your stories even hotter.
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Well written combination of physical and emotional heat
Your ability to combine thoughts, emotion, and physical heat, makes your stories both intellectually interesting and erotic. Keep writing and keep sharing them with us!
I know you are writing from Cole's perspective, but if you could add some of Nikki's perspective - for example, how she liked getting her ass fucked - through her actions and her words (you didn't have her vocalize at all when Cole was fucking her ass) I think it would make your stories even hotter.
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