Spooning

Love.

Really liked it. Mostly because it sounds like something my husband would send me since hes deployed.

Grammer--Grammer--Grammer

Story idea was good but inception was very poor as numerous spelling and grammatical errors made it hard to follow.

Love

Great story. Shows the real intimacy between them

Thanks for feedback

I am new to this forum, so all feedback is welcome and will be taken on board.

This is so good! So hot! Just a few spelling errors but overall it was really good. I wished it was a little longer. The lady you're talking about she sounds like a lucky lady. Good luck with your writing.

Grammar-Grammar- Grammar

Funny how the doofus moaning about 'grammar' managed to spell it wrong... People crack me up!

Anyways, loved the letter!