The story was on the brief side and I wish it had been more fully developed. Nevertheless, it was an upgrade over the past few efforts and shows promise. I still think your earlier efforts were much better. They were longer and had a more developed story with several scenes.
I realize time is scare, but keep up the good work and always look to improve.
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Not bad at all...
The story was on the brief side and I wish it had been more fully developed. Nevertheless, it was an upgrade over the past few efforts and shows promise. I still think your earlier efforts were much better. They were longer and had a more developed story with several scenes.
I realize time is scare, but keep up the good work and always look to improve.
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