I loved it But Why do women shave their pussy I like to see hair on a womans pussy
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Anonymous09/04/09
a sub par offering
Is this an early submission?, or were you allowing others to post under your name? this is poorly written and filled with mis-spellings and improper tenses
by
Anonymous07/12/13
another great story from the great L.A.
The only thing that can rival a boy's love for his mother's cunt is a father's love for his baby girl's sweet little coochie. As this story shows, a father is often real anxious to introduce his fat veiny daddy-dick up his darling daughter's cute little cunt, and a daughter is often just as anxious to open up her cunt to her daddy's big hard cock. I'm glad that father and daughter are going to be together always. Dad'll be unloading his big fatherly balls up his darling daughter and shooting her twat full of the sperm that made her. There's no doubt that dad'll be fucking a baby--lots of babies--up his own baby girl's cunt.
I normally don't worry about correct English providing the meaning is clear but all three chapters are riddled with incorrect homonyms to the point where it became distracting to the story. The story was full of standard cliches and would have been better if both Kissandrea and her father had far more believable proportions. Apart from that, it wasn't a bad little story.
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So Hot
I loved it But Why do women shave their pussy I like to see hair on a womans pussy
a sub par offering
Is this an early submission?, or were you allowing others to post under your name? this is poorly written and filled with mis-spellings and improper tenses
another great story from the great L.A.
The only thing that can rival a boy's love for his mother's cunt is a father's love for his baby girl's sweet little coochie. As this story shows, a father is often real anxious to introduce his fat veiny daddy-dick up his darling daughter's cute little cunt, and a daughter is often just as anxious to open up her cunt to her daddy's big hard cock. I'm glad that father and daughter are going to be together always. Dad'll be unloading his big fatherly balls up his darling daughter and shooting her twat full of the sperm that made her. There's no doubt that dad'll be fucking a baby--lots of babies--up his own baby girl's cunt.
Mediocre
I normally don't worry about correct English providing the meaning is clear but all three chapters are riddled with incorrect homonyms to the point where it became distracting to the story. The story was full of standard cliches and would have been better if both Kissandrea and her father had far more believable proportions. Apart from that, it wasn't a bad little story.
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