At first glance I tend to agree with the anonymous poster - as it stands this story probably belongs in a different category. However, you've planted some seeds that could make this the first installment of something more - I'm hopeful that that you have more to tell us about these people.
Sorry if this wasn't the best place to put it. When I finished it I just wasn't sure which category was the best. Does anyone know how to move stories to different categories? Or would I just have to delete it and resubmit somewhere else? Also, which category would be more suitable?
Wrong fucking category! There is no ROMANCE! being stoned is not even remotely erotic let alone romantic! Post your shit where it BELONGS!
And So?
At first glance I tend to agree with the anonymous poster - as it stands this story probably belongs in a different category. However, you've planted some seeds that could make this the first installment of something more - I'm hopeful that that you have more to tell us about these people.
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Sorry if this wasn't the best place to put it. When I finished it I just wasn't sure which category was the best. Does anyone know how to move stories to different categories? Or would I just have to delete it and resubmit somewhere else? Also, which category would be more suitable?
Sorry, I'm pretty new at this.
i liked the ending. lol Awesome.
I saw the romance in it. It was mostly nonverbal intuitive. And yes, this if you kept seeing her would be a good start for more short installments.
P.S. it sounded like you were at the right place at the right time. Oh and the ending was awesome, gave me a good laugh
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