Excellent. Really like what you are doing with this.
Your pacing is perfect and build up is delicious. I can't wait for the next chapter.
The tension is building - looking forward to more. BTW, I'd love to meet the lady!!!
Really enjoy your story. Keep'em cumming. Thanks.
I am loving this story as much as I have all your others!
So, just how many men is Randy inviting over? And I really don't believe that he is planning to stay at home all this time. Gotta go out for groceries at some point, right? Thanks for writing more, really enjoy Linda's adventures.
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Excellent. Really like what you are doing with this.
Very erotic
Your pacing is perfect and build up is delicious. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Great again
The tension is building - looking forward to more.
BTW, I'd love to meet the lady!!!
Friends
Really enjoy your story. Keep'em cumming. Thanks.
Loving it!
I am loving this story as much as I have all your others!
Linda's in Trouble!!!
So, just how many men is Randy inviting over? And I really don't believe that he is planning to stay at home all this time. Gotta go out for groceries at some point, right?
Thanks for writing more, really enjoy Linda's adventures.
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