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I would love to see you continue with these characters. Lots of great chemistry between them & fun places to take it. More please.
it was amazing hope you continue with this story can make more chapters
Don't be one of them.
Please don't be one those author's who write a GREAT story and just stop without finishing it. Don't leave us hanging.
more
oh my gosh this was amazing, more please
too much buildup..not enough payoff
you did a great job introducing the characters and their stories but when it got to the sex part you were way too quick with it. the blowjob lasted a paragraph. it was like you were just trying to get through with the sex so you could write about the characters more.
Wonderful. .
Wonderful. Sometimes an author can go too far and end a story without going into the people and their feelings. You are doing a great job here and I want to read more.Thank you!
I hope that isn't the end of it. l think you built up their story nice and it was just getting started. i hope you might continue it.
very hot
so do hope you continue with this story put together very well and so would like to hear more thanks John
Just like all your stories I love it. Please continue
Chapter One
This story is intended to be chapter one of The Quarterback and the Tutor. An error prevented the chapter information from being printed with the story.
Thanks for the kind and generous remarks. I hope to have chapter two posted in a few days.
Tom better be a real good guy
doesn't he have a gf -.-
Loved it! Can't wait for more :)
Great story
This is a hot story, looking forward to more chapters. Great job!!!
Awesome Beginning
Next step is to include the GF I hope
Great Start
Loved the story and the hot ending. Glad to see that it is Chap 1 with more to come. Look forward to it.
Great Story . Loved how you brought them together and the football jock had love in him and not just about how wonderful he was to let the other guy suck his dick then leave. cant wait to read more.
Pls dont make it a bisexual story
excellent story! I think this is leaning more towards a love story and Tom realizing he doesn't love his GF and Blake coming out with the aid of Tom
Goof story
More chapters.... Please!
Waiting excitedly for the next episode
Great start to the story....keep it up
An amazing start to what is already an exciting story ...
I've missed your work so much !! Finally back and what a comeback !
The characters are delightful - Tom does sound cute apart from intelligent and Tom ... Wow!! Very sexy.
I liked the pace of the story - it kept me at the edge of my seat. Totally loved it !
Dying to read the rest ! Thank you Perihelion ! It was a pleasure to read your work again. I sorely missed it.
Great start!
I like how dominant Tom was during sex AND how nice he was afterwards. It was a cute beginning. I'm glad I'm reading it while there are already more chapters!
I see what yo did there.
I actually read all of the chapters and I've noticed you've forgot the name of lucas father on latter chapters.
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