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It All Began With a Kiss Pt. 02

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Very well written

I'm loving the plot! And there's just something about the way you write that lets us feel like we get to know the characters. Also you do a good job of not making the story completely about sex. The one thing you could do better is length and detail. The details matter.

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