The Life of Miranda

nothing worse then child abuse turned into adult rape by the family and yes i say rape since she was never allowed to defend herself or protected and cared for.

abuse

I agree this is not BDSM, its child abuse turned into rape

seriously!?

To other two commenters: this is an erotica site. Have you read the other stuff on this site??? You've got to be kidding me with your remarks. If you dont like it, go pick up a f%cking harlequin romance over at your local CVS store. To Author: This story is hot. Thanks for posting!

wrong category

This is not bdsm. There was no consent on her part. She is just so submissive that she followed orders....because she was beat as a child. WTF! This would have been perfect in non con. She is forced no matter what. The story gives all the info the reader needs. She is unworldly. Taught at home by a mother that despises her, the evidence that she was touched before marriage. BDSM is not this or this story. Not trying to be the lit police here but there is no use of RACK or SCC, regardless of how hot it may or may not seem to the reader. Should be moved...No, needs to be moved to non con or novels and novellas.

oh forgot

If in this society the age is really 21 than from your own writing she is being raped as a child. At eighteen vs twenty-one these people are pedophiles.

There's no rule in fiction that BDSM has to be consensual. How's this any worse than fucking magical unicorns, which this site allows?