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Ooooh interesting!
Wow it's so nice to see a really well written new story in this section. I'm really intrigued and I sense this is going to be great. Too few authors seem to grasp how important an awesome storyline and intriguing characters is, and sex is only hot for me when you have that. I'm so excited to see where this goes. Thanks so much for this! Please give me more? (Also not sure if this was intentional but the club gave me a Mass Effect 3 Purgatory Bar vibe and Drinta an Avina vibe? If that was deliberate, then even more yay!)
Should this be in the Sci-Fi category instead?
The story itself seemed fine, though I'm a bit puzzled why this is in the Nonconsent category. That being said, the characters of Arden, and especially Drinta, are interesting and offer much potential in future chapters. Looking forward to reading what happens next.
not enough
i am going to have to wait for at least a few more chapters to seriously critique this storyline. I think the quality of the writing is good. The author has that sparse, tight 'Noir' style down pretty well.
Non-con . . .
must be its targeted readers. Sci-fi fans will find it via the story tags.
Excellent beginning, I do hope future chapters will be longer.
Wonderful
Keep it coming, love it!
So far so good
I'm assuming that since she is being hunted that is where the non-con is going to come into play but this definitely would be loved by sci-fi readers! I'm loving the writing style so far and hope you continue :)
great start
I'm looking forward to finding the time to read the rest of the story, great writing.
Beautifully written!
Excellent work here. Grand imagery and I'm captured by the beginnings of the story line. My only suggestion would be a selfish request for longer chapters. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sucked right in
Yup. I got sucked right in. Your story was recommended to me by one of my buddies here, author karaline, and I also saw your story on a faves list today of someone who liked one of mine. Well sure enough - great stuff so far! The writing is clean, tight, and via dialog we get just the right flavor to give us a sense of all of the characters, even though we've just started out. I felt your prose is able to stick a landing like a gymnast. I'll be devouring the rest, as time permits. :) 5★
~Eris
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