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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/20/15

You wish

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by grrlslave02/20/15

Doesn't deserve a slave

While I understand this is fiction, this asshole doesn't deserve to be called a master and he certainly doesn't deserve to be an owner. A real master protects his property (condom).

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by swingerjoe02/20/15

Good concept

There is a seed of an interesting story here. I like the concept of a "pass-around slut" who is forced to service strangers by her master with her mouth. As another person commented, you went off the rails a bit by portraying the master as being so careless about his property. I would've preferred to see this story expanded to portray the slut servicing multiple strangers with her mouth only. A little more background on the relationship between master and slave would have helped this story as well.

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