This is definitely one for those who like a quickie. The sex is unimaginative and lacks any real connection between the characters.
That having been said, it's not all bad, with some interesting text work early on and a little description. With more work this would have been a much better read.
She is a wife? All I read was a whore being used and stupid not being paid for it!!! Next time the lover will share his whore with his friend...maybe his friend pay him for using his whore...For me this is another racist story!!! This time degrading latina's wives...1*
If the writers intent is to give us short doses of good cock-raising pornography, she is succeeding most admirably..
naughtymaria gets my congratulations and 5 star vote.
Well, Sweetie's Hubby, Scott, got most of Ch2, but he was pretty much a non-entity in Ch1 & Ch3! There is no OTHER aspect of the couple's life developed except for her infatuation with her new Bull's sexual appetite! That makes all of them one-dimensional, therefore hard to care about very much!
Wham Bam...
This is definitely one for those who like a quickie. The sex is unimaginative and lacks any real connection between the characters.
That having been said, it's not all bad, with some interesting text work early on and a little description. With more work this would have been a much better read.
A Fun Quicky****
Now that's a different kind of story. Hot and sexy. Thanks for sharing
She is a wife?
She is a wife? All I read was a whore being used and stupid not being paid for it!!! Next time the lover will share his whore with his friend...maybe his friend pay him for using his whore...For me this is another racist story!!! This time degrading latina's wives...1*
Short and sweet
If the writers intent is to give us short doses of good cock-raising pornography, she is succeeding most admirably..
naughtymaria gets my congratulations and 5 star vote.
Scott as Hubby
Well, Sweetie's Hubby, Scott, got most of Ch2, but he was pretty much a non-entity in Ch1 & Ch3! There is no OTHER aspect of the couple's life developed except for her infatuation with her new Bull's sexual appetite! That makes all of them one-dimensional, therefore hard to care about very much!
3*
A CUCKETTE
and a slut, what a wife. TK U MLJ LV NV
who are these people
and why should we care?
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