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by Anonymous

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by LarryInSeattle02/28/15

Don't give up your day job!

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by Winzip04210902/28/15

Needed more bouncing boobs !!!

For a first story it was just ok.
Could have used the help of a good editor or mentor.
I am not a writer but is seemed more like you writing what you're thinking rather than building characters and a story line.
Keep working at it, don't let the doubters get you down.

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