All Comments on 'Our nice Miss Price'

he ogled her tits : she leered @ his tool !!!

for me' Mom'n Dad taught me t'behave

so I take me virginity to me grave ..............sigh .....

Killer lines , Androgyn !! 5-ed & fave-ed !!

...and viagra. Witty, sexy, well observed Britishness gone by. Excellent work.

Romance, eroticism and gentle humour at their very best.

I'm not usually into poetry, but that was a pleasure to read. A well deserved 5.

Just Brilliant, well done Androgynousother.

Humorous and romantic. Very well done.

...and bold Iambic Pentwater. Shakespeare would be proud, if not a little bit shocked at your skills, good sir!!!

YOMEYO

I read all your words

And I read them again:

You tell of a world

That’s unusually sane.

So please write lots more

(Undoubtedly you will) -

Next one up a tor

And beside a sweet rill?

Sex on a mountain,

Sex in a stream,

All seems quite lovely -

If only a dream.