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Mmmmmm
Very hot story! Loved it!
Nice! I'd love to read the continuation ;)
Very hot!
As a mainly straight guy with bisexual fantasies, this is one of my favorite kinds of stories! I'd love to read more.
I agree with Jason
This was very hot....
next 'issue' please !
Wow, that would be so lovely.
So erotic
I've been curious for so long and reading this story made me so hot. I can't wait to read the next chapter
That's muy caliente. I can't wait for more surprises
more
more plz!!
Wow
That was a very good 1st part, more please.
Horny
Mmmm made me hard and horny. I never dod it with a guy but I'd love to try, especially if it's this HOT!! Please give us more...
Strong Narrative Voice!
I particularly enjoyed the exposition. In another tone it could have been annoying/cheesy, but your writing style took over and created something that I could easily picture. I can't wait to read more and I hope you continue with this style because honestly, you have a skill not possessed by many. On the erotic side, I enjoyed it alot, and I'm female! Keep it up!
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