You told it well and I enjoyed reading it; I hope you will bring us more soon. As to offending people, well some people are easily offended as you will find if you decide to stay here. The only thing I can suggest is that you write for yourself and don't fall into the trap of trying to please everyone -- it never works.
Nicely done, thank you, and please have four stars.
She was not into BDSM and had no choice in it so take this crap to non-consent where it belongs. Safe sane and CONSENSUAL is the foundation of BDSM. This was just a petty weak man using his marriage vows to abuse his wife.
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Well done on your first story
You told it well and I enjoyed reading it; I hope you will bring us more soon. As to offending people, well some people are easily offended as you will find if you decide to stay here. The only thing I can suggest is that you write for yourself and don't fall into the trap of trying to please everyone -- it never works.
Nicely done, thank you, and please have four stars.
She was not into BDSM and had no choice in it so take this crap to non-consent where it belongs. Safe sane and CONSENSUAL is the foundation of BDSM. This was just a petty weak man using his marriage vows to abuse his wife.
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