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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/22/15

Kick him to the curb!

Maybe then he'll figure out how fantastic she is. Get a good Daddy who loves her as much as she does him. Obviously she doesn't love the games as much as he does. When a man says "you're my number one girl" always ask how many other girls do you have and how long till I'm not any more? Male whore!

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by Anonymous02/22/15

I just don't get when stories try to sell the idea that that submissive partner likes something that is obviously emotionally painful and the story is clear that it is hurtful for them. Going on about being wet or hard is such crap. For the dominant partner to do something like this is ugly and shows a lack of caring. It is not play.

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by Anonymous02/22/15

Please don't continue. You're obviously not a little so stop writing stories about something you have no idea about!!

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by SluttyMinx02/24/15

some girls.....

like the emotional pain to a point. you can't dis something that you don't fully understand. but for a daddy to go so far as to replace his little for any period of time is unusually cruel I have to admit.. although my beloved daddy and I have an agreement that when we cant play for extended periods of time he can find a temporary little.. and it hurts but as long as he is happy then I am ok with it.. but then again it is only when we have to be apart without communicating with each other for months

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by Anonymous02/25/15

awesome

Please continue, I wanna keep reading!!

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by daddysbabygirl7202/26/15

From the author

As this was my first attempt at writing, I do appreciate all feedback. This is actually a personal kink of mine. I have a Master that I call Daddy most of the time and he calls me babygirl. We do not engage in age play though, it is more of a generalized Daddy Dom / babygirl relationship. I also have a very strong cuckquean kink that we have never physically acted out yet. This story (all three parts when published) represents the absolute extreme of my fantasy. It is cruel and harsh and very possibly unrealistic. But isn't that the point of stories sometimes? To take us places we cannot really go? This story will be hard, I hope you all can enjoy it for what it is. I haven't written the follow up but the redemption for babygirl will be complete and perfect (at least to me!) Thank you again. :)

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by Dustylilac02/28/15

Keep writing!

I love reading exaggerated fantasies that are too cruel for real life. And CLEARLY other people do too... Why do you think there's a "nonconsent" section??? I'm amazed that people are being so judgemental. Loved it. Keep going. Good job.

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