I think your story was great. I plan to read your prior stories about young studs and their conquests of older women. I hope you continue this series with Wally and the sexually desperate Doris. Wally may want to add more older women to his stable of 40 plus year old women who need hard young hung manhood in their mature orifices.
Like the story but a lot of the sex scenes seem like they were lifted from some of your previous work just about word for word. Not that that's a bad thing but just a little strange. I know you have a ton of great stories so it's probably just me use to your style. Thanks for the writing.
I loved it and look forward to more tales of Wally with older ladies. There were a few biological inaccuracies however which do take the edge of the story a little. Older ladies do have some flaws due to aging.
A bit stereotypical, but not bad. What does irk me are the spelling and punctuation errors scattered throughout the story. Spell-checking is not proofreading. You need to learn to read proof on your stories before you submit them.
It might be interesting to have Doris get some of "the girls" her age together and have them gangbang him for an entire night, and have him get them all off until he can't get t up any more, but leave them all satisfied.
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03/26/15
Reliving the moment...
Having been in Clara's position, I so much enjoyed reliving the seduction....
Excellent
Love your stories. I hope you take this one to the next level and get Wally involved with Clara, Doris and the rest of her friends!
Great Story
I think your story was great. I plan to read your prior stories about young studs and their conquests of older women. I hope you continue this series with Wally and the sexually desperate Doris. Wally may want to add more older women to his stable of 40 plus year old women who need hard young hung manhood in their mature orifices.
Like the story
Like the story but a lot of the sex scenes seem like they were lifted from some of your previous work just about word for word. Not that that's a bad thing but just a little strange. I know you have a ton of great stories so it's probably just me use to your style. Thanks for the writing.
Very erotic
I loved it and look forward to more tales of Wally with older ladies. There were a few biological inaccuracies however which do take the edge of the story a little. Older ladies do have some flaws due to aging.
A bit stereotypical, but not bad. What does irk me are the spelling and punctuation errors scattered throughout the story. Spell-checking is not proofreading. You need to learn to read proof on your stories before you submit them.
It might be interesting to have Doris get some of "the girls" her age together and have them gangbang him for an entire night, and have him get them all off until he can't get t up any more, but leave them all satisfied.
Reliving the moment...
Having been in Clara's position, I so much enjoyed reliving the seduction....
hot
great story, very descriptive and great sex
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