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Physical inconsistencies.
This story is hot; however, one jarring aspect is that there is an inconsistency with how the wife is lying. Is she lying on her stomach or her back? How is it that one guy is sucking on her tits while another is spreading her arse cheeks and eating her out? If they're flipping her over, then this needs to be spelled out. And if she's on her back and they're lifting her legs up to get access her her arse... well, this doesn't seem to fit, but if this is the case, you're going to have to spell it out.
Otherwise, a great story.
totally unrealistic
Far-fetched. Impossible to do that to a woman unless she is unconscious
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