Justyna and Greg - An Incest Story

Promising...

You might want to ask someone else on this site, who speaks English, to proofread your work, because it is good and the language inconsistencies are not a major drawback, keep writing :-)

a little background as to why her mom is mad at the aunt,along with the editor.

Get an editor

Good grief. Get an editor and stop using Google Translate

The Point of Getting an Editor

The Anonymous reader whose review is titled Get An Editor makes a valid point. What I am trying to do here is reinforce and expand upon that person's comment, which had an insulting tone to it.

Literotica maintains a list of hundreds of editors. When English is not your native language you may make many grammar errors, such as using the male possessive 'his' with a female subject. An editor will usually spot such errors and offer corrections. You should ask the editor you select to explain what is being corrected, and why. This will help you learn the English language better.

I posted eight stories to Literotica before I realized that I needed an editor myself. My word processing software catches spelling and most grammar errors. But it can't catch an inconsistency like changing a character's name in the middle of the story. There are plot errors or out and out plot guidelines that novice writers like us may not realize we need. An editor can help with this, also.

I hope all this helps.

Don't be discouraged

You have actually written a very good beginning and the English is easy to understand (not perfect, but whose is?). Please keep writing!

Good story

Keep writing. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

Good story

Very good work, especially in a language other than your own. (I'm a teacher, and I read material just like this from students who have grown up in the US!) Story is sensuous and quite believable. One point of clarification: sexual relations between cousins is not technically classified as incest. About half the states in the U.S. permit cousin marriages, but among the others there are states that forbid it but don't label it incest. (How I wish I had known this when I was a teenager and hopelessly in love with my cousin!)