Many thanks for pointing that out, an accidental spelling error that evaded the editing stage. I hope it did not detract too much from the reading. If anyone wishes to help editing, feel free to message me directly.
Thank you for sharing, Bundu. The story grabbed me from the start and held my attention as you built the tension. Well done! I love a long and drawn out tease. And as your first posted story, it is impressive. I look forward to more!
Finding good editors is hard and even then, the occasional error can slip through. I caught a couple on my last story at the last second, after I proofread it twice and had two editors check it. We do the best that we can and hope the readers understand.
I'm not usually into sex from the start but I honestly must say I didn't know I held my breath from the beginning of the story not until I exhaled at the end. It's really really lovely. Hope to read more exciting stories from you. Thanks for sharing.
Ripley, that is praise indeed from an author I have just discovered but greatly admire. I only hope I can learn to develop characters as well as you can. The bar is set high.
BugattiT - many thanks, I am pleased I was able to hold your attention from the get-go.
This story is like poetry in motion...rhythms of a sweet sexual movement Words that burn in climax Chills in aftershocks yet lingers like a goodbye kiss - you touch your lips close your eyes Breath in Exhale - damn this story is gud.
English
Oops
"assent" agreement
"ascent" upward movement.
two different words.
Oops indeed!
Many thanks for pointing that out, an accidental spelling error that evaded the editing stage. I hope it did not detract too much from the reading. If anyone wishes to help editing, feel free to message me directly.
Erotic from the start
Thank you for sharing, Bundu. The story grabbed me from the start and held my attention as you built the tension. Well done! I love a long and drawn out tease. And as your first posted story, it is impressive. I look forward to more!
Finding good editors is hard and even then, the occasional error can slip through. I caught a couple on my last story at the last second, after I proofread it twice and had two editors check it. We do the best that we can and hope the readers understand.
Wow
I'm not usually into sex from the start but I honestly must say I didn't know I held my breath from the beginning of the story not until I exhaled at the end. It's really really lovely. Hope to read more exciting stories from you. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you
Ripley, that is praise indeed from an author I have just discovered but greatly admire. I only hope I can learn to develop characters as well as you can. The bar is set high.
BugattiT - many thanks, I am pleased I was able to hold your attention from the get-go.
Thank you
This is such sexy writing done so well.
Sensuous
Wow...perfect balance of explicitness and sensuousness. Beautifully written and hot!
This story is like poetry in motion...rhythms of a sweet sexual movement Words that burn in climax Chills in aftershocks yet lingers like a goodbye kiss - you touch your lips close your eyes Breath in Exhale - damn this story is gud.
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