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Is that what you want? Someone to cum all over your face and treat you like a bimbo.
Its an erotic mind control story!
Hey last commentator, it's a freaking erotic mind control story! It's not The Way We Were. What did expect? What are you even doing on this site if that story bugged you?
Good story. I'll read more if it continues.
Work on Writing Skills
How could you write something like "restroom room?" Very awkward writing. Work on your writing. Review and revise before posting.
Good start
Very nice beginning to a story. Hope to see more chapters soon.
I apologize for missing the "restroom room" part of my story while editing and reviewing. Trust me, I did review it multiple times before submitting and made quite a few edits (no one's perfect), but it must have looked fine in my mind while reading it again. What were some other edits that I may have missed?
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I would love to see her fuck herself with a gear shift in a convertible with the whole crowd watching. or bent over a car and fucked hard like a whore. great story
Great Start
Where can I buy one of these cars?
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