I don't know if you think you're teasing your readers or if you're just too lazy to write more than a page, but this little bit isn't worth the effort to click on the link to open it. Don't bother posting again until you have something worth reading. I'm just sorry the lowest available rating is one star.
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Anonymous02/24/15
good start
good start...don't be scared off by the negative comment. At the end of the day, these are stories we read at our leisure. It isn't as if you ran over anyone's pet dog.
We all have to start somewhere.
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Waste of a post
I don't know if you think you're teasing your readers or if you're just too lazy to write more than a page, but this little bit isn't worth the effort to click on the link to open it. Don't bother posting again until you have something worth reading. I'm just sorry the lowest available rating is one star.
good start
good start...don't be scared off by the negative comment. At the end of the day, these are stories we read at our leisure. It isn't as if you ran over anyone's pet dog.
We all have to start somewhere.
good start
But like a previous comment said it's kind of bad place to stop
the bit was not it
what awakening...there was nothing but anticipation. There should have been much more than this.
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